Attempts at Haikku continued. . .

White on Green
Disoriented Bees wail
The morning dew.

Chasing the stars
With shivering thoughts
The winter is on.

The sky melted
The ground absorbed
Water in my open-well.

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One response to “Attempts at Haikku continued. . .

  1. Sudhanshu Mohanty

    The 2nd stanza is very good. Keep it up.

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